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Monday, July 2, 2018

Focus writing dialog


Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
Before and after the talking.
How to put in other punctuation
? goes on the inside of the speech mark.
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When 2 people are talking or more.
Different words for ‘said’
A different word for said is respond,asked,or even replied,or ask , responded politely,yelled,mubbling,mutting,gasp,screming,yel
Adding adverbs
Screaming angrily.yelling angrily,shouting,

EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.


MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.
”Good afternoon Dwyane. How was your day?”Asked Sumuree.
“It was good” replied Dwyane.

“Good afternoon Sumuree, how was your lovely day?” Waiari asked with a smile.

“It is a miserable day for me”

“Why Sumuree?”Questioned Waiari.
“Because my papa died, and I was upset”.

“Hi Dwyane,how was your weekend?"
Asked Waiari.

“It was so tiring”.

Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
Before and after the talking.
How to put in other punctuation
? goes on the inside of the speech mark.
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When 2 people are talking or more.
Different words for ‘said’
A different word for said is respond,asked,or even replied,or ask , responded politely,yelled,mubbling,mutting,gasp,screming,yel
Adding adverbs
Screaming angrily.yelling angrily,shouting,

EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.


MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.
”Good afternoon Dwyane. How was your day?”Asked Sumuree.
“It was good” replied Dwyane.

“Good afternoon Sumuree, how was your lovely day?” Waiari asked with a smile.

“It is a miserable day for me”

“Why Sumuree?”Questioned Waiari.
“Because my papa died, and I was upset”.

“Hi Dwyane,how was your weekend?"
Asked Waiari.

“It was so tiring”.

Thursday, June 28, 2018

A creepy man called prince

One horrible rainy day there was a man name prince he was Bad and He was a murder at the same time.
He had 6 daughters and 5 sons with two of them were twins and also he had a beautiful charming wife with a lovely soul in her heart.He lived at a creepy woods That had wolves and creepy clowns.
It was a really small town that they were at.
Then suddenly the prince was drunk and had a gun and a knife in his hand saying “i will kill you all” he said then he shot his wife with his gun then stabbed her in the stomach.Then One kid was in his bed thinking what to do and he chucked his long blanket to the ground and the other end to the hook.Then he jumped out and quickly run so he can go somewhere safe.then he went sleep .And then he woke up in a maze where someone took him to.

He was fratin of the maze because there were big spiders and also scary creatures in there.
Then he walked until a huge big spider came to eat him.Then he run all the way to the exit to get out.

south by southren cross by waiari and lily


Tuesday, June 26, 2018